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(Looking for constructive criticism) So i've begun to make a new track

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kurups



well - one that doesn't (at the very least) sound similar to that of snake shit. Although being that it is ENTIRELY unmastered and I've only heard it on my speakers, who knows what it will sound like to you!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_ZYQDk7yKBc&fmt=18

or if you want a .wav version
http://www7.zippyshare.com/v/1059463/file.html

I made it in a few hours today when i decided to sit down on reason and just force myself to keep going until i've finally made a riff that i can work with. Which is, for me, the hardest part.. sitting still long enough to make something rather than getting frustrated after 5 minutes.


Anyways it's (obviously) nowhere near finished - but before i take it any further i wanted some serious constructive criticism as to where i should take it - or more importantly whether i should at all (don't be scared to tell me it fucking blows, seriously)

I just made a quick little intro, one that is most definitely going to be changed - so you can skip past it if you'd like, the main riff starts at 30 seconds

Setup:
Reason 4.0
Midi Keyboard
Shitty Speakers (not monitors, just regular ass old speakers)


EDIT: The photo in the youtube link was just some random photo on my desktop. I presume it will be your faces while listening to my track, though, so it works out.

Jack Herror

Jack Herror

yo I just had a quick listen
it doesnt blow so I guess you should take it further!
I think I would give that riff a lower octave (in reason)
or like switch between your synth and the same synth in a lower oct a couple of times in the song
Wavey

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